Sunday, 24 May 2009
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The Great Xanga Round Story (UPDATED)
Legendairy had a great idea.
He thought it might be fun to put together a story on Xanga
where each person involved will write a chapter.
He calls it
The Great Xanga Round StoryTable of Contents
Chapter One: Frozen_Assets
Chapter Two:You_Forget_Who_You_Are
Chapter Three: And_Take_a_New_Angle
Chapter Four:Check_or_Mate
Chapter Five:Moral_Relativity
Chapter Six: Decisions
I am writing Chapter Seven.
I do not read mysteries and I am not one of the better writers on Xanga
but I loved this idea and wanted to be a part of it.
Special thanks to saintvi for editing it and helping with the ending!!
Chapter Seven
Always Trust Your Gut
As Gregory rounded the first corner he tried to recall the basic survival skills
he had learned from his years in Boy Scouts.
He remembered to duck low to peer around the corner;
never greet the unknown at eye level.
The coast was clear. He knew he had no time to waste,
yet he had to be cautious and as aware of his surroundings as possible.
The first thing he needed was some kind of weapon.
It is true he had never won a fight in his life
but this time he knew he had to be ready and he had to win.
He saw a towel laying on a chair, grabbed it and wrapped it around his arm.
It would offer some protection. Leaning against the wall near the chair was a push broom.
Gregory quickly unscrewed the handle and took that with him also.
He had to find a way to get up to the the main floor.
The building had twelve levels below ground;there had to be stairs.
He was weak from weeks of inactivity but the adrenaline rush was sheer energy.
Rounding a corner, Gregory found the stairs; dare he risk being on an open stairwell?
He wanted to bolt and take this first exit he found but his instinct told him to wait,
there must be an elevator somewhere, too. Another survival skill he learned was,
"Always trust your gut instinct."
Creeping past the stairs, he rounded the next corner and spied the elevator.
It was the kind he'd only ever seen in old movies, a cage with a gate in front of it.
No one was in sight as he reached the elevator and opened the gate.
"It smells just like Grandma's sewing machine," he thought.
For a second, Gregory smiled as he pictured his Grandmother sitting at her sewing machine
working on one of her beautiful quilts...
He shook his head to clear it. This was no time for sentiment.
If he was going to get out of here alive he needed to keep his mind focused.
His fingers were just closing on the elevator's control switch when he heard voices.
Gregory froze. He knew the elevator would make noise in the otherwise silent building.
The voices drew closer; whoever they were, they were coming down the stairs.
Heart pounding in his ears, he ducked down. Suddenly, he heard his name;
they were talking about him!He couldn't make out what they were saying,
but he heard the squeak of their shoes on the concrete floor
as they walked down the passage he'd just traversed. It was now or never.
Gregory hit the switch and began the slow journey upward to freedom.
Chapter Eight: Train_of_Thought
Chapter Nine: Probability
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Comments (27)
that's good-you are a story teller-you did write this right?
It makes me want to read more.. You did a fine job.
That was really good. *deep breath in* *cracks knuckles* Here we go! :D
I think you did an excellent job!
now I gotta read the others@k8tthelate - Thank you!! That mean a lot coming from you!
@The44thHour - I look forward to reading yours Andrew!!
BRAVO Beth! Very well done!
@seedsower - Thank you! I'll have fun writing it; I hope everyone enjoys it. :)
I just read the first six chapters. Very mysterious!
Very cool idea! I hope Gregory makes it out!
What a FUN idea!! And you are too a great writer!!! Now I'm going to have to go read the other chapters!!! :)
I loved it! I can't wait to read the other chapters!
Okay. After reading all the chapters, I declare to you--
I WIN!!
This was good! I enjoyed reading it!
Nice job! I wonder if anyone is going to tie in some of the early details... like how did the freezer get ripped open? Curiouser and curiouser. (and I say that in case the other authors are reading the comments hehe) Seriously though, good job... and to think you thought you weren't a good writer.
@Legendairy - I think it would be fun to write another chapter lter on and do that ,I did not think of that!!
That is a great idea. I am not much of a writer so I couldn't do it but that is great.
@Legendairy - That is a cool idea you came up with.
@TheTheologiansCafe - I am not a writer either,but it was fun.
Haven't read the earlier chapters but i'm hooked now! Love the grandma's sewing machine smell reference. My great grandmother had one of those old singer ones with the manual push pedals. I was instantly transported back to being about 6-7 years old, being under that thing pushing the pedal for her.
LOVE THIS!!!!
Excited to read more. Go Gregory Go!
kewl!
@rbmegert - Thank you!!
Those elevators smell just like that!!
Very nice
Oooh, very cool! Very cool indeed!
Excellent job, Beth! Don't think I could attempt something like that yet!
Nice job with the elevator. Gregory is beginning to develop into an interesting character. I'm going to have to put on my thinking cap when my turn comes around.